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All Of Us


This chain broke free, I stand and weep
Wishing for the death of me
We all fell into misery,
And we all know what that brings

We have all cried ourselves to sleep
We have all at a time stumbled down the hall
Searching for a destination but first we must fall
We all know what the pain feels like inside

You would all understand my suffering
We have fallen too many times, its never ending
We should wish not to hide
Cause there is no reason why

So here we are, all of us
Standing here, with our feet in the sand
Knowing together that our lives are not bland
I wish that we were not as lost
©2004-2009 ~ThE-Untitled-Man
:iconthe-untitled-man:

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i wwrote this about 6 months ago but just now re-wrote it

enjoy

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:iconchangethecombo:
perttyful. and sad. :clap:

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You are different, just like everyone else.
:iconthe-untitled-man:
thx

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my life, is like rotten fruit...
somebody will be willing to eat it,
but then emediatly spits it out.
:iconfragilemacabre:
Sadness...

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:blackrose: we all have no chance in this horrid romance :blackrose:
:iconthe-untitled-man:
i dont get it... why is it so sad?

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my life, is like rotten fruit...
somebody will be willing to eat it,
but then emediatly spits it out.
:iconfragilemacabre:
It's kinda hopeless.
It's all in the diction, my dear...

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:blackrose: we all have no chance in this horrid romance :blackrose:
:iconthe-untitled-man:
yeah... but i still dont find it sad... i dont know maybe its just me

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my life, is like rotten fruit...
somebody will be willing to eat it,
but then emediatly spits it out.
:iconthe-invasion-concept:
it is sad. being lost i mean. it's horrid!!! Good poem!

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!@#$%^&*()_
:iconthe-untitled-man:
im happy that you like it

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my life, is like rotten fruit...
somebody will be willing to eat it,
but then emediatly spits it out.
:iconlolana:
i dont find it sad...i find it as fate
just something you have to deal with when you live like us i guess.. the open minded and enlightened do know this pain of knowledge and those who choose ignorance live without this feeling...its not a bad thing, just a well sideaffect

love the piece..well done

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